Improvements

Some of the improvements made to our first draft include:
These improvements have come from audience feedback, through film viewing, and our own increased knowledge.

1. Adding the banners instead of 'star' shaped text boxes. This still creates the theme of a comic book aspect to our trailer which conforms to the 60s theme we have used.

2. Changing the sound. In our first draft we have the sound cut out when the protagonist talk, however we have now changed this so that the soundtrack fades out as he talks.

3. Book turns. The original first draft includes book page turns, but the final draft now includes books turns we have created which say 'Starring Harry Littlefield' and 'Adam Riley', as well as the original ones.

4. Title. The title is now shown over a clip of the boy walking and it includes the Royal Air Force Roundel in the 'O' of 'FLUOXETINE', this is a common symbol relating to the Mods.

5. Final two clips. We have used two clips at the end which contrast in colour and meaning. The first clip is bright and is an establishing shot of Sheppy, representing a good point in his life. The second clip is dark (at night) and represents a bad place in his life, another establishing shot is used, but this time of Brighton. These opposing clips show contrast of the points in his life.