In our first cut of our trailer 'Fluoxetine' the introduction shows a young boy, in a parka and jeans, in an isolated area. The use of the block house shows intertextuality with The Who's, 'Who's Next', album cover. The Who was a major inspiration for our trailer as they were a very influential band in the 60's and 70's, a key feature of our trailer.
'One boy's journey' 'To find himself' 'Through a different era' is the anchorage text used to give the audience more information about the story of the trailer. However we still need to change the text which accompanies these images, the text is 'Lucinda Grande', white and bold on a black screen, however after researching other posters, such as the Beatles and the Who, we aim to resemble the conventions of these texts.
After this we aim to include a clip of the boy and his father putting boxes into the boot of a car and then standing together, this will show that their bond is still strong as they are leaving the isolated place, however the death of his mum has caused them to move and could potentially cause friction between them.
The idea of using the pages from the 'Mod' book allowed us to represent to the audience how he is imitating the lifestyle of the mod culture and how he is idolising the mods. However we felt that there are slightly to many clips of the page turning so we will need to delete some of the less important ones.
For the current title at the end of the trailer it is just a plain black screen with 'Fluoxetine' on it. We are going to change the font of this, as it is the same as the anchorage text at the beginning, and we feel that this looks amateur at the moment.
Another aspect which we need to change is the music as at the moment the music is a recorded and has talking over it, this was only done to show the feel of our trailer. We are currently researching into other '60's rock' soundtracks that we can use for our trailer.